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Post by mobbie on Sept 4, 2006 14:45:18 GMT
THANKS Really thanks. It's still very hard for me to make poems and I feel so lost when I try (so your encouraging compliment was ... erm.. encouraging!!) Thanks !
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Post by Ubereil on Sept 4, 2006 19:39:03 GMT
Mobbie and poetry? Übereil
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Post by mobbie on Sept 4, 2006 19:41:23 GMT
MEAN!!!! *SOB*
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Post by LaFille on Sept 4, 2006 21:19:23 GMT
Very nice, Mobbie. You're lucky to get sudden inspiration bursts like that. ;D Thanks for sharing!
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Post by mobbie on Sept 4, 2006 21:23:28 GMT
Hehe thanks. Sudden inspiration burst? It's probably thanks to this enchanted forum ;D
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Post by riverman on Sept 4, 2006 22:30:58 GMT
Good poem Mobbie! Thanks for posting it.
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Post by mobbie on Sept 5, 2006 20:43:25 GMT
Whoa, thanks riverman, I liked your poems too. If you keep writing new poems, I promise I'll read them, and who knows, maybe I'll get inspiration by them and write even more ;D So keep poempoempoemingmiming riverman
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Post by Shan on Sept 5, 2006 21:42:35 GMT
riverman, i've just been catching up on the poems you've posted since i last read. again i am impressed. theyare very good and i enjoyed all of them. they still remind me of the poems by ee cummings. any special feelings when you wrote "unwrap rapture" and "developer?"
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Post by Shan on Sept 5, 2006 21:46:27 GMT
i just finished reading you poem, mobbie. even translated in english, it is very good. i love the feeling it gives. it makes me wish i could read it in swedish, because i am sure it loses some of the deeper feeling in translation. hey, if you write any more or have any more that you have written. i would love to read more. again, great poem.
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Post by Shan on Sept 5, 2006 21:48:06 GMT
hey, ube do you write poetry too? if you do, i want to read some.
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Post by mobbie on Sept 5, 2006 21:48:41 GMT
Hihihi, Thanks shan My poem DOES lose some of it's feeling, even I can feel it (since I cannot use the words I want to be able to use in it...) Sure, if I happen to write something new, I'll be sure to post it Since there is support here, why not ! ;D
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Post by mobbie on Sept 5, 2006 21:51:16 GMT
Ube and poems? Naaah, no way ;D (no offense, ubbie... det bara låter skumt ;D)
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Post by Shan on Sept 5, 2006 22:01:33 GMT
yay!!!!! if mobbie writes more poems we get to read them. it's a shame that feeling and meaning at times get lost in translation. it is still very good though and i really like it.
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Post by Shan on Sept 5, 2006 22:03:58 GMT
you mean there is no way i can get a poem out of ube? ;D i had no idea if he wrote or not. who knows though, he might surprise us some day. hey, ube if you ever do decide to give it a try, i wanna read it.
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Post by mobbie on Sept 5, 2006 22:08:27 GMT
Well ube is quite unpredictable, as far as I know.... I'm sure he'll come up with something that will make us just look at it like a pair of
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Post by mobbie on Sept 5, 2006 22:11:14 GMT
yay!!!!! if mobbie writes more poems we get to read them. ...Come now, they´re not that good Shan And if you keep being so happy I will surely start writing within 48 hours... Which feels.... .... I stand clueless ;D We'll see what happens!
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Post by riverman on Sept 5, 2006 23:44:08 GMT
Whoa, thanks riverman, I liked your poems too. If you keep writing new poems, I promise I'll read them, and who knows, maybe I'll get inspiration by them and write even more ;D So keep poempoempoemingmiming riverman I have a few phrases that I'm kicking around , I'll have one eventually , thanks.
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Post by mobbie on Sept 5, 2006 23:45:53 GMT
hehe sounds great ;D
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Post by riverman on Sept 5, 2006 23:51:57 GMT
riverman, i've just been catching up on the poems you've posted since i last read. again i am impressed. theyare very good and i enjoyed all of them. they still remind me of the poems by ee cummings. any special feelings when you wrote "unwrap rapture" and "developer?" Hi Shan , thanks. Yeah dveloper is kind of about eminant domain and homes being condemned by big government so that big business can move into the area and build stores. The Government can decide to condemn a piece of land if they think a store or apartment building will generate more taxes. I am renter so I feel for people who's homes are in jeopardy. Unwrap rapture , Kind of a random sequence reflecting on a week of life , how things can seem overwhelming "the seventh disaster" is kind of like how I feel on sunday when work is the next day. Then also that phrase wonders perhaps if God hadn't rested, things may have been different, only metaphorically.
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Post by Shan on Sept 5, 2006 23:53:28 GMT
may not be that good to you, but i like it.
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