Killerzzz's Poetry

[killerzzz]

Hey dere.

Last night, Shan and I were talking about stuff and one thing we discussed touched on the topic of a poem i had written, like, the day before.

Which I thought was way crazy, so I had to show it to her.

If we hadn't had that conversation, it just would have gathered dust in a binder somewhere in my house.

Her comments encouraged me, so I thought, why not, I'll show you guys it too! ;D

Abstract Souls

Feel free to tell me what you think.

I also showed her another one, and though it's not as good (I wrote it ages ago and haven't even looked at it in years), it's a fun little creepy story-poem.

Whisperers

Actually, its just more of a rhyming story if you think about it.

Killerzzz

[LaFille]

Love your first one, Abstract Sould; very nice, sensitive and it flows well. The second one I have a harder time to grasp though. ;D Thanks for sharing.

[killerzzz]

Mar 28, 2009 4:10:40 GMT LaFille said:

Love your first one, Abstract Sould; very nice, sensitive and it flows well. The second one I have a harder time to grasp though. ;D Thanks for sharing.

Thanks, Fille!

Yeah, The Whisperers was a sort of childish rhyme I've always had a soft spot for since it nicely expressed my occasional (and back then, frequent) nightmarish nights.

But yeah, it's not exactly 'poetic'. ;D

Killerzzz