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Post by riverman on Sept 4, 2006 23:34:08 GMT
s.l.a.m
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The Contradicting Heart Stop feeling sorry for yourself, my hands and the thinkers and the leaders The workers bee'
The Cult Of Id, biblical possession~sad to see my can't heart be free. I mean released~ The Rights of Paul and The Message Of Christs
Hard to smile souls~falling down.
I see You need to keep what I've seen I have not spoken to you in my forever
where are you now that the hour has past for a need?
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Post by riverman on Sept 4, 2006 23:35:03 GMT
Unwrap Rapture
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I pedal push out formless calamity pardon my burden while I sip my tea from the bottom are the forecepts to pull you from you
Those nightime wishes no malice in mind and all the more viscious
I frown at the pavement to walk my way home I drive to the stars to walk my from... morning brings end to fabled disrapture
Five more days of sleepwalk chatter On the sixthe day~relief The seventh disaster.
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Post by riverman on Sept 4, 2006 23:36:15 GMT
Dveloper
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You want to take my home from me? I would advise against that. You let your dollar fables buy some moral favor? A move like that , and I guarantee, a short time later control will be taken from you. I will be chosen to decide your fate. Not a decision You should want me to make. We could avoid all of this, you must harvest that soul from the mire of your eyes , clouded by the fog of "you"....
What about us, do you really want society darwyn? The rules will be broken, the strong will survive. Justice mothers will come. She will erase your city and vanquish your precious guise.
Think Twice
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Post by riverman on Sept 4, 2006 23:38:56 GMT
Wrong Eye
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Down the river I drift Cool oasis casted shadows what was it I was looking for?
Blinded by Mist I missed the rivers drift She knows my name Why was I searching? for nothing I guess.
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Post by riverman on Sept 4, 2006 23:40:05 GMT
The above are just some that I posted in other places on this forum and others , I just wanted to keep them together.
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Post by riverman on Sept 4, 2006 23:54:16 GMT
Early I wasted time to hasten I gathered up worthless intent.
In my nines I was born in my teens I was killed In my twenties I'm still dead My hope thirties ~ born again.
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Post by riverman on Sept 5, 2006 0:04:02 GMT
Limited Dreamer
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See a scene of the sleeping sleeper doper passifying real emotion and unable to dream. Smoked away his night time emoticons for waking grande illussion. Dreams won't come to the numb, when we use, we run and bury truth and proof that we ever felt anything at all
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Post by riverman on Sept 5, 2006 0:05:46 GMT
Economy Stream. 30 secs to write.
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To be down among the ragged my heart has seen their scars I am one of them hiding behind a sense of righteous intent Told by all you won't make it you're not worthy of our attention.
We see the commerce popping all for others never for us They laugh at our circumstance we hide from the glaring flourescents.
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Post by riverman on Sept 5, 2006 0:11:49 GMT
Streaming bitter econonmics
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I've been fighting as long as I can remember all of their ideas of my forever You should be this you should be that
Profit from make money that's what you need
Oh ~ your spirits bleeding? doesn't matter this is what we have We have all accepted it what's wrong with you ? what makes you so special?
I guess I thought life should have more meaning
Why are none of us more special? all is given to this machine I'm losing my humanity in the name of commerce Pay me to plant trees that sounds like something to be
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Post by riverman on Sept 5, 2006 0:20:43 GMT
Proposal
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I propose a Jesus face pillow case, to rest my head and dream of lizards and snakes.
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Post by riverman on Sept 5, 2006 0:38:14 GMT
Old Friend
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We parted ways without saying a word Sadly all things must end my "friend".. You have no idea how close you came I had to walk away.
I will exist in your dreams try to erase me from the front of your mind You may for a time... ....I will arise.
You always knew I was danger The fear was always there something that bothered me why were you so scared?
Did I yell at you in anger push you from your chair? You talked out of turn a lesson I learned can't trust a weak man He'll say what he can cast shadows on the bright to hide his crimes divert their eyes from his feeble mind
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Post by mobbie on Sept 5, 2006 14:59:00 GMT
Unfair. Unfair unfair unfair !! You are so good with words and can make so many poems, and of such quality! ...Don't mind the text above to much... I'm just jealous I think your poems are really good, I read almost every one of them and I didn't get tired of reading them (usually, reading 4 pages of poems can be tiresome...) But it's a bit good... Your poems helps me improve, and adjust my own writing, so thanks ;D Great poems!
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Post by riverman on Sept 5, 2006 23:05:11 GMT
Unfair. Unfair unfair unfair !! You are so good with words and can make so many poems, and of such quality! ...Don't mind the text above to much... I'm just jealous I think your poems are really good, I read almost every one of them and I didn't get tired of reading them (usually, reading 4 pages of poems can be tiresome...) But it's a bit good... Your poems helps me improve, and adjust my own writing, so thanks ;D Great poems! Hey Mobbie, Great! thanks a bunch for liking them. I look forward to reading whatever you come up with. Also , yes it can be quite a task reading that many pages of...anything , especially poetry, so thanks again .
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Post by mobbie on Sept 5, 2006 23:11:21 GMT
hey, always fine when we can help eachother ^_^
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Post by Shan on Sept 6, 2006 3:55:03 GMT
riverman is really good, but i think i see some good stuff inside someone else just waiting to be written and posted here.
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Post by riverman on Sept 6, 2006 11:18:59 GMT
riverman is really good, but i think i see some good stuff inside someone else just waiting to be written and posted here. I agree with the second part of this statement.
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Post by mobbie on Sept 6, 2006 11:33:23 GMT
I have no clue what you two are talking about...
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Post by riverman on Sept 6, 2006 23:30:24 GMT
This one is just some words that fit together to me...for the moment..
What stirs in the darkened heart The one that gave up on love?
While wishing for eternity Posing empty arms embrace Wilting withered wanting waiting for love to come.
Darkness draws closer ~ the nights passions subsiding. Sadly slinking ~ sinking back ~ into that solemn lonely you.
Wait forever~never let go ~ never give up.
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Post by riverman on Sept 8, 2006 1:33:09 GMT
A communication. Explain The Point of the body.
You aren't gonna like this one--but there is no human body, only the perception of a human body.
You aren't really here.
Feed a family of four with this? "Dad I'm hungry" sorry Son , I'm not here.... But Dad my stomach hurts Well son , your not here either go ahead and choose to not suffer the unreal pain of your unreal hunger I won't be here to hold your hand To help you survive, we aren't even here never mind the effects of my neglect on your spirit and withering body, good night , I can't love you because neither you nor I nor love exists. Sad.
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Post by mobbie on Sept 8, 2006 15:27:32 GMT
...Sad poems there riverman, they´re very... sad Mobbie dun like sad poems, they´re good and all that.. But I don't like them, sorry I like happy poems about love and friendship
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