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Post by riverman on Sept 8, 2006 20:25:36 GMT
Mobbie, I know what you mean and once something happy comes , I will be the first to poeticise it. I basically post these here to keep a record and perhaps get a bit of feedback. At the moment I reside in the depths. Thanks.
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Post by mobbie on Sept 8, 2006 20:50:42 GMT
Ye, I just want you to know, that I don't DISlike your poems in general or so, what I'm saying is, that even the best writer in the world wouldn't please me, if it was a sad poem ;D
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Post by riverman on Sept 9, 2006 2:28:55 GMT
Mobbie, I am glad you had any response at all. I would be more troubled if you were not phased, at least you knew they were sad. That's all I can hope for.....ty.
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Post by mobbie on Sept 9, 2006 11:32:10 GMT
No prob River, I like reading your poems, sad or happy, I want to read them and feel something. Then if I don't like sad poems, that won't stop me from comenting them ;D You´re not getting away
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Post by Shan on Sept 9, 2006 19:30:42 GMT
riverman sad poems, happy poems, i don't care. i just like reading your poems. I do hope you get to feeling better though.
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Post by riverman on Sept 9, 2006 22:48:10 GMT
riverman sad poems, happy poems, i don't care. i just like reading your poems. I do hope you get to feeling better though. Hi shan , I smile while I type Shan. Thank you. I will feel better when I can sort things out a bit in regards to my career. I have things in progress, I am only waiting mandatory days to move to a new level. I must hold a certain license for truck driving for thirty days before I can move forward with my plans. The poem of greater sadness was really a communication between myself and a bhuddist online pal of mine. I will and am feeling better as the days get closer to me taking charge , to some degree of my financial situation. I grew up sort of poor, and for the longest time I didn't mind. Now though I have an 8 year old son and 6 month daughter, I am finaly ready to embrace material. I am 29 and I'm just a bit frustrated that I took so long to figure out that I should pursue money for the comfort of my family. The love is there, we are wealthy and blessed to have each other. Thanks again shan, for your possitive sweetness. I hope "sweet" does not bother you , it's the only word that I see as fitting. Sweet means cool and nice too....
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Post by mobbie on Sept 9, 2006 23:12:39 GMT
So many parents on Chaos cascade, I feel a bit out of place I do hope that you will still have time to post here on chaos, riverman. I like that you post here, you are an inspiration source for me, and I think I'm starting to come up with another one of my shortie-poems, maybe even a little bit longer this time.
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Post by riverman on Sept 9, 2006 23:49:35 GMT
So many parents on Chaos cascade, I feel a bit out of place I do hope that you will still have time to post here on chaos, riverman. I like that you post here, you are an inspiration source for me, and I think I'm starting to come up with another one of my shortie-poems, maybe even a little bit longer this time. Cool Mobbie, I will come here as much as I can , Don't feel too out of place, with my interests , I probably shouldn't be here...haha. Though Perry(ptsteelers) has turned me on to a few cool comics and things so...what the hay
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Post by Shan on Sept 10, 2006 2:25:30 GMT
riverman Nah, the word sweet doesn't bother me. I'm glad someone around here thinks I'm sweet instead of a little pest as some others probably see me as at times especially here lately. ;D hey, i know what you mean. we have two little girls and money isn't over flowing at our house either, but i think we are very wealthy in what matters the most. we have each other, we love each other, and we are very happy. just hang in there and never give up. you've got the most important things and as long as you've got those you're a winner. money may help take care of you but it can't buy happiness. i wouldn't trade what i have with chris and the girls for all the money in the world.
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Post by Shan on Sept 10, 2006 2:29:30 GMT
So many parents on Chaos cascade, I feel a bit out of place I do hope that you will still have time to post here on chaos, riverman. I like that you post here, you are an inspiration source for me, and I think I'm starting to come up with another one of my shortie-poems, maybe even a little bit longer this time. no way, you shouldn't feel out of place mobbie. you fit in great. i am anxious to read what you come up with.
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Post by mobbie on Sept 10, 2006 10:43:17 GMT
Still working on it, but it's still lacking some I think I'm about 45 % done
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Post by Shan on Sept 12, 2006 1:40:35 GMT
And I am still waiting to read it when you have it finished.
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Post by riverman on Sept 12, 2006 22:42:57 GMT
This is not a poem:
A God created mankind has fallen nature by sin. God creates Man , man is not pleasing to God. God decides to punish man by making him mortal and suffer the pangs of life without his immediate blessing. Man now has to work to fold himself back into Gods Good Graces.
Why should Man want to go back to God? Man is not owner of himself. Man is a disappointment to His Father. Have any of you a Father? a father is strict , his expectations are great. It is easy to disobey your father, when you don't understand Him.
The world has an order. A natural Order. How is it that some of us believe that order does not apply to us? that we exist beyond the natural relationship of God Earth Man.
Why is it difficult to believe in God? because it is, that's the job. Why is it easy to disbelieve? because it is, that's the test.
Why do we think we transcend the species and it's inherited challenges? What is mans work on earth , in these bodies? As human beings we must do better than Light. All of the eastern thought may be true, though it may only apply to dead people. We are here in bodies , subject to natural law. Man with his mind (body) will never have the ability to go beyond the actual gray matter, water , hearts , lungs , air.
Lucifer: The LIGHT Bringer/Bearer. En-light-en. Why was the fruit of knowledge the first sin?
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Post by riverman on Sept 12, 2006 22:44:16 GMT
ALSO NOT A POEM: Life is Conditional Love can be unconditional as percieved by the lover. Love is not the creative life force, life continues in the world without it. Love makes life better , sometimes.
Hate has all of the qualities of love. If you hate, you must love whatever it is that you hate. If you do not Love your object of Hate, you would not have all of the passion that Hate requires.
Love is as selfish an emotion as any. Hate has built the world. We hate to stay still , we love comfort. The Love of Comfort keeps creation alive. The hate of inconvenience fuels inovation. The Hate of suffering causes the Love of Money.
Without Love? Yes the Love of ourselves is percieved as hate of others. When A government condemns a perfectly good home, using eminant domain laws, for the purpose of a developer building a mall , a heightened tax generating potential is seen as justification for the condemnation. The Love of money is percieved as abuse by the home owner, which manifests hate in the heart of the abused.
Love is Hate, the two are never seperate. There is only emotion, All of you "light beings" are wishful thinkers. Any Love for something is Hate for another. Love is not a universal quality anymore than any other emotion. If Love is the reason for everything , so is hate , envy, tenderness , calousness, naivety ,wisdom and all other percieved emotions/conditions. It takes the whole of human experience to manifest Love. The universe itself, is not love or hate or any other human emotion. The planet has existed for millions of years without humanity. Our notions about life are a breif amusement in the existense of the universe.
To apply human concepts such as love to the universe is egocentric and self biased. You lot of hippies are confusing Love with God. Guess what, God hates you
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Post by riverman on Sept 12, 2006 22:45:57 GMT
The above psots are not directed at anyone, only randomly generated thoughts.
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Post by mobbie on Sept 13, 2006 12:10:05 GMT
And I am still waiting to read it when you have it finished. You´re making me nervous, it's not gonna be any good @ River, Hmm... Nice poems, I´ve been thinking about similar poems myself, the concept in those you posted is all too familiar to me Good ones!
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Post by riverman on Sept 13, 2006 14:42:08 GMT
Thanks mobbie.
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Post by riverman on Sept 17, 2006 2:01:15 GMT
I'm not sure about the lifespan of a ladybug. When I moved into my old house I saw a ladybug four years later I moved out I saw a ladybug leaving the house as I turned to take that final look. The ladybugs shell was all white and faded it seemed that this was the very same bug that was there on the day I moved in. Could it have been that very same one? if only I knew her name.
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Post by riverman on Sept 17, 2006 2:10:52 GMT
The ladybug lifespan seems to be one of those subjects that can't be agreed upon by all those that publish about them. It is likely that most of those publications are by people that are writing from research taken from other publications and not first hand personal experience or research.
Some say their lifespan is 2 or 3 years while most say they only live one year. After being around them for many years, I think it will take time to prove how long ladybugs of different species live. If the Convergent Ladybugs life was only one year, they would all die in their feeding zones the following year.
They hatch out in March, April, or May of one year, so they would die in March, April, or May the next year, if this one year idea was true. The only ladybugs that would migrate back to the mountains would be the newly hatched ladybugs. But in reality, the older Convergent Ladybugs out number the newly hatched ones be double most years.
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Post by Shan on Sept 18, 2006 3:14:33 GMT
riverman, i really like you two posts that you labeled not a poem. these two are very, very good. i find them very thought provoking and i really enjoyed them. thank you for sharing them.
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